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The door

let me be
but you didn't
I know you've tried
and so do I

Just tell me I have a chance
because when the sun will rise
there will be only
one survivor
from the door.

Paper is flying in the air.
Please take me, away.
Take me
to the peaceful city.
Another silly.
I had though
some things I broke in half.
I want to go to the past,
and start again
because there's always a path we choose
that leads
to the door.
©2008 ~ReAlRocKa
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try to read it with an other mind...


and try to find out what Im talking about
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~Poetic-Chick:iconPoetic-Chick: Jul 15, 2008, 3:22:53 PM
yeah i'm trying to figure it out now.....hmm.....
*sigh* i read it like 6 times.....i'll get it eventually though. I'm not giving up!! lol

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I hope life isn't a joke, becuase if it is I don't get it......
~ReAlRocKa:iconReAlRocKa: Jul 15, 2008, 4:07:43 PM
tips : we live this moment but we dont li it neither

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''RocK your soul babe''
~Poetic-Chick:iconPoetic-Chick: Jul 16, 2008, 9:01:38 AM
so we live it, but don't like it.
our paths always lead to the door.
then u want to start over.
hmm........it's like on the tip of my tongue right now.
does it have to deal with death?

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I hope life isn't a joke, becuase if it is I don't get it......
~ReAlRocKa:iconReAlRocKa: Jul 16, 2008, 12:31:04 PM
yes

its death

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''RocK your soul babe''
~Poetic-Chick:iconPoetic-Chick: Jul 16, 2008, 5:14:48 PM
I knew I could figure it out! ^^
well your poem really does make you think diffrently about it. Something you wish you could escape, but in the end that's always where you'll end up.

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I hope life isn't a joke, becuase if it is I don't get it......